Sunday, April 24, 2011

Call Me!

Anna was gone, so William couldn't stop thinking about her.

A few days later, Spike who is room mate with William was wearing William's scuba diving suit. He was never Britain's best-dressed man, but today his clothes were even stranger than usual.
He said "No clean clothes."
It was a lovely day and they went outside into sunshine, but Spike still wearing scuba suit and goggles.
William said "Any massage for me?"
"Yes, I wrote down two." said Spike.
But, William got only one message. He asked Spike"The only you didn't write down...Who were they from? "
Oh, no! He said he couldn't remember!!
After while, he said "Ah...there was  one from an American girl a few days ago. Anna, I think she said."
William was surprised, "What did say?"
"The massage is strange. "Call me at the Ritz."And then She gave a different name." 
"What was the name?"
"No, idea." Spike said.
Oh, my god. William ran inside and he called the Hotel.
"I got a massage from Anna Scott. She's staying with you. She asked me to call her."
"I'm sorry, sir. We have nobody here of that name."
William kept going, "I know that she's using another name. But the stupid person got massage from her, so he forgot the name..."
Suddenly, Spike shouted 'Try "Flintstone".'
William spoke slowly into the phone.
Amazingly, the phone was forwarded to Anna!!!
"Oh, hi. It's WIlliam Thacker. You called me.... "
"Well, yes. Three days ago." she said.
William said the reason why he called lately and then he asked whether she can come for tea, or not.
Anna said, "I'm little busy. But I'll try. Four o'clock."
William said, "Wounderful."

1 comment:

  1. This is a classic scene. Please make sure that you're writing from the first-person perspective but in your own words. Avoid copying exchanges such as the one above into the blog. This exercise allows us to get inside the main character's head and think as they might think. Thank you!

    -G

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